New Ending

In the story "The Interlopers," Ulrich and Georg were traped by a fall tree. They get a word fight for a long time, then they decided to be friends, but they start to screm for help, and a pack of wolves came and eat them. In my new ending, "I will kill you," said Ulrick to Geeorg. And they start to shoot each other for a long time, but there was no murder. They talk for a moment " why we are fighting like cats and dogs," said Ulrich. "because we heat each other," said Georg. "but why we live in the same neighborhood," said Ulrich. "I think you are right, so lets be friends ok with no more fights, said Georg. "ok,' said Ulrich. Suddenly a pack of wolves came, and they start to shoot them, so they fled away. Georg jump and say "yeah we did it," but he turn aroud, and Ulrich shoot him in the head, and say "I told you I would kill you ha, ha, ha, ha, ha, ha."

Character Interview

Character Interview with Ulrich von Grandwitz from"The Interlopers"



1. What was your first impresion when you see the wolves?

Well my first impresion was that I will get eaten by the wolves.



2. Why you don't grab your gun and shoot the wolves?

Because I had one arm numb beneath me and the other was caught in the branches.



3. How did you feel when you got trapped by a tree next to your enemy?

I felt like I wanted to kill him in that moment.



4. What you will do if the tree don't fall on you with Georg?

I will kill him like a dog.




5. Where would you will take Georg if you had trapped him?

A place where he could not sleep.

First Person Point of View

For a long time nobody came here, but one cool night someone was coming. I see two man walking through me, then they start to drink me for many hours, one of them was so drunk. Sudenly the drunk guy was chained on the wall, then the other guy start to build a brick wall to let the drunk guy in side. They start to talk, but suddenly he finished the wall and go out. For the next fifty years nobody saw the drunk guy, and I will remember this forever.



By The Amontillado Wine

Figurative Language

"Montresor heard a low laught the made his hair stand up" is from "The Cask of Amontillado". This is an example of Personification because it akes something non human sound human.



"Step on a mouse and you leave your print, like a Grand Canyon" is from "A Sound of Thunder". This is an exam ple of simile because it uses the word like.



"The Tyranosaur Rex make a sound of thunder" is from " A Sound of Thunder". This is an example of metaphor because it don't uses the word like or as.


"He wore a clown costume and coneshaped cap with jingling bells". This an example of alliteration becaude it repeats three or more consonant sounds in the same sentence.

The Cask of Amontillado

The Cask of Amontillado takes place at a carnival. After that, it's inthe catacoms. This is where families bury their dead. It's scary!