Thursday, May 1, 2008

New Ending


In the story "The Interlopers," Ulrich and Georg were traped by a fall tree. They get a word fight for a long time, then they decided to be friends, but they start to screm for help, and a pack of wolves came and eat them. In my new ending, "I will kill you," said Ulrick to Geeorg. And they start to shoot each other for a long time, but there was no murder. They talk for a moment " why we are fighting like cats and dogs," said Ulrich. "because we heat each other," said Georg. "but why we live in the same neighborhood," said Ulrich. "I think you are right, so lets be friends ok with no more fights, said Georg. "ok,' said Ulrich. Suddenly a pack of wolves came, and they start to shoot them, so they fled away. Georg jump and say "yeah we did it," but he turn aroud, and Ulrich shoot him in the head, and say "I told you I would kill you ha, ha, ha, ha, ha, ha."